This Is Just Infinite

Very fun take on twine poetry! I just discovered this jam over five years too late, and am diving into the entries.

My version:

I have politicized

the ducklings

that were in

the reader

and which

you were roughly

bleeding

for rebirth

Forgive me

they were fluorescent

so sharp

and so learned

This is my one 

I have eviscerated
the authorities
that were in
the region

and which
you were symbolically
crucifying
for reaffirmation

Forgive me
they were repugnant
so wrong
and so brash

The way the musical accompaniment is tied to the changes in text (in the auto setting) really gives a wonderful dynamism to the work!

This is really clever. I wish I'd thought of it.

This is an amazing idea and well executed! I think the original poem is great and you really captured the weirdness and playfulness of the meme'd iterations over the years.